This is absolutely phenomenal; easily the best RPG maker game I've ever played. That's saying quite a bit because I hated XP, mostly because of the character sprites, but I love this game. There are a few grammar and spelling errors, and one or two awkward scene errors when the 'wait' counter should be a little short or longer. Honestly though, really amazing work!
Also I'm stuck on the part where you have to sneak by the guards, I can't seem to find anywhere to sneak by where they won't catch you.